Writing poker instruction, need proof-readers

[johnbaker]

i wrote this mainly to help a friend of mine who is one of the biggest fish i know, so I had to start from the ground up.... i kind of skipped around a couple of topics that he was familiar with, so please tell me what i left out that beginners should know

this is kind of huge, i hope the forum will let me post something this long.... crit&comments would be appreciated, thanks


(edit)

it was too big to fit it all, you can read it here



-JB